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22 January
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English (US)
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Simplified Chinese (China)
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Can you please proofread my writing?
sound natural?
1. This is a document translated by City Hall Consultation desk for foreign residents, aiming for support foreign citizens understand the procedures easily.
2. This is a document translated at the Consultation Desk for Foreign residents of City Hall so that foreigners can easily understand the procedures.
Can you please proofread my writing?
sound natural?
1. This is a document translated by City Hall Consultation desk for foreign residents, aiming for support foreign citizens understand the procedures easily.
2. This is a document translated at the Consultation Desk for Foreign residents of City Hall so that foreigners can easily understand the procedures.
sound natural?
1. This is a document translated by City Hall Consultation desk for foreign residents, aiming for support foreign citizens understand the procedures easily.
2. This is a document translated at the Consultation Desk for Foreign residents of City Hall so that foreigners can easily understand the procedures.
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This is a document translated by the City Hall Consultation Desk for foreign residents, aiming to support foreign citizens understand the procedures easily.
The second one is perfect. However, the first one sounds more professional.
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This is a document translated by the City Hall Consultation Desk for foreign residents, aiming to support foreign citizens understand the procedures easily.
The second one is perfect. However, the first one sounds more professional.
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