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"The build-up of the importance of having a slim body is one of the crimes of marketing and fashion industry."
Is this sentence acceptable and grammatically correct, especially when there are too much "of" words?
"The build-up of the importance of having a slim body is one of the crimes of marketing and fashion industry."
Is this sentence acceptable and grammatically correct, especially when there are too much "of" words?
Is this sentence acceptable and grammatically correct, especially when there are too much "of" words?
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@Van111444
The building up in importance of having a slim body is one of the crimes of the marketing and fashion industries.
Using punctuation, you could make it a little bit more readable –
The building up in importance of having a slim body; this is one of the crimes of the marketing and fashion industries.
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