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6 Nov 2015
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English (US)
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The lacrosse team of my university in Japan which I've been a member of has a big tournament today!!!!!
We can participate in the national athletic meet if we would win this tournament today!
Since we've practiced very hard for this tournament, I'm very excited and nervous. I wish I was there.
Good luck my club members! Does this sound natural?
The lacrosse team of my university in Japan which I've been a member of has a big tournament today!!!!!
We can participate in the national athletic meet if we would win this tournament today!
Since we've practiced very hard for this tournament, I'm very excited and nervous. I wish I was there.
Good luck my club members! Does this sound natural?
We can participate in the national athletic meet if we would win this tournament today!
Since we've practiced very hard for this tournament, I'm very excited and nervous. I wish I was there.
Good luck my club members! Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
"My university's lacrosse team in Japan, which I've been a member of, has a big tournament today!!!!
We can participate in the national athletic meet if we win this tournament!
Since we've practiced so hard for this tournament, I'm really excited and nervous. I wish I was there.
Good luck to my club members!"
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