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16 May
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Is this expression natural?
If it's not,could you please proof read my writing?
<1> If i fall in love with someone, I'm propably obsessed wth him and become an easy girl. So i'm scared of that. What should i do not to be such an easy girl. Could you give me any advices?
(好きな人ができると依存してしまい、都合のいい女になりそうで怖いです。どうすれば都合のいい女にならずに済みますか。アドバイスをください。)
<2>Well, she is enjoying being in love.
(いやぁ～恋を楽しんでるね。)
<3>What? End? Do you have anything more ? and You are quite condescending hey.
(え、終わり？もうちょっとなんかないの？あとめっちゃ上から目線だな。)
Is this expression natural?
If it's not,could you please proof read my writing?
<1> If i fall in love with someone, I'm propably obsessed wth him and become an easy girl. So i'm scared of that. What should i do not to be such an easy girl. Could you give me any advices?
(好きな人ができると依存してしまい、都合のいい女になりそうで怖いです。どうすれば都合のいい女にならずに済みますか。アドバイスをください。)
<2>Well, she is enjoying being in love.
(いやぁ～恋を楽しんでるね。)
<3>What? End? Do you have anything more ? and You are quite condescending hey.
(え、終わり？もうちょっとなんかないの？あとめっちゃ上から目線だな。)
If it's not,could you please proof read my writing?
<1> If i fall in love with someone, I'm propably obsessed wth him and become an easy girl. So i'm scared of that. What should i do not to be such an easy girl. Could you give me any advices?
(好きな人ができると依存してしまい、都合のいい女になりそうで怖いです。どうすれば都合のいい女にならずに済みますか。アドバイスをください。)
<2>Well, she is enjoying being in love.
(いやぁ～恋を楽しんでるね。)
<3>What? End? Do you have anything more ? and You are quite condescending hey.
(え、終わり？もうちょっとなんかないの？あとめっちゃ上から目線だな。)
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- English (US)
- Hindi Near fluent
I will write this in the present tense and as if you are narrating a possible scenario. This is more stylistic to what you have written.
<1> If I fall in love with someone, I'm probably obsessed with him and become easy. So, I'm scared of that. What should I do to not be so naive? Could you give me any advice?
<2>Well, she is enjoying being in love.
<3>What? The end? Do you have anything more? And you're quite condescending, eh.
This version is how you would speak and write in formal, standard English.
<1> If I fall in love with someone, I'd probably become obsessed with him and become easily accessible. So, I am scared of that. What could I do to avoid being so easy? Can you give me any advice?
<2>Well, you do enjoy being in love.
<3>What? That's it? Do you have anything else? By the way, you are quite condescending.
- English (US)
@shiosai23
Your sentences are pretty good! But a few things are lost in the translation:
<1>
好きな人ができると依存してしまい、都合のいい女になりそうで怖いです。
I'm dependent on the person I love, so I'm afraid that I'll become a pushover. (都合のいい女は英語で pushover という意味だと思います)
どうすれば都合のいい女にならずに済みますか。アドバイスをください。
What should I do to not be such a pushover? Could you give me some advice?
<2>
この英文はとても自然だと思います！
<3>
え、終わり？もうちょっとなんかないの？あとめっちゃ上から目線だな。
What? It's over? Isn't there anything more? You're really condescending you know.
Hope this helps! >W<
- Japanese
@jenmcconnell
Thank you for getting back to me quickly and for the precise review of this matter.
That was really helpful. Thanks a lot!
Thank you for getting back to me quickly and for the precise review of this matter.
That was really helpful. Thanks a lot!
- Japanese
@rubycon5
Thank you for your reply.
I'm so happy to learn the nuance from native English speaker.
And your Japanese is way too natural and amazing. すごい！
Anyway, that was very helpful. Thanks a lot!
Thank you for your reply.
I'm so happy to learn the nuance from native English speaker.
And your Japanese is way too natural and amazing. すごい！
Anyway, that was very helpful. Thanks a lot!
- English (US)
@shiosai23
No problem!
Your English is amazing too! I'm really impressed.
英語の勉強頑張ってね
- English (US)
- Hindi Near fluent
@shiosai23 I think you should go with Ruby's response as my Japanese is not great.
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