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25 May
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Is there any mistake?
Why do you think it needs to be outlawed?
Because in my opinion, all tread should be fair. For instance, when I think about the university entrance exam, in Japan, everyone studies hard to take and pass the university entrance exam so to not waste their efforts all universities should be incorruption. In addition, I believe that outlawing bribery will be one of the solutions to the poverty of problem in developing countries.
Is there any mistake?
Why do you think it needs to be outlawed?
Because in my opinion, all tread should be fair. For instance, when I think about the university entrance exam, in Japan, everyone studies hard to take and pass the university entrance exam so to not waste their efforts all universities should be incorruption. In addition, I believe that outlawing bribery will be one of the solutions to the poverty of problem in developing countries.
Why do you think it needs to be outlawed?
Because in my opinion, all tread should be fair. For instance, when I think about the university entrance exam, in Japan, everyone studies hard to take and pass the university entrance exam so to not waste their efforts all universities should be incorruption. In addition, I believe that outlawing bribery will be one of the solutions to the poverty of problem in developing countries.
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25 May
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since it looks like a formal writing you should change everyone to all students or just students 👍
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since it looks like a formal writing you should change everyone to all students or just students 👍

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I feel like it should be "entrance exam, so to not waste their efforts"
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also the use of incorruption is incorrect it could be "universities should not be corrupted"
hope I helped😀
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Also you wrote tread do you mean trade?
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should bribery be outlawed?
in my opinion, i support fairtrade. for instance, when i think about the university entrance exams in Japan, everyone studies hard for a passing grade. to not waste the students' efforts, all universities should have ethical standards. in addition, i believe that outlawing bribery will be one of the solutions to poverty in developing countries.
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