Could you please help with my sentences?🌙🌙
I want to make them sound casual and natural!!
How would you say this??

1. Ujin and I talked so much throughout the day and it was so fun. I couldn’t help but enjoy.

2. He’s definitely not my style but I’ve kind of fallen in love with him.

3. I would enjoy tomorrow as well I’m gonna make the most out of it.

4. I like him and when he’s around my heart is beating but objectively speaking, he’s far from an attractive man and, he looks too weak.

5. Let’s be a nice person honestly I’m still not sure the definition of a nice person but I will do nice things towards this world.

6. Life is very short and I freaking know that.

7. Why is it so hard to speak English? Is it supposed to be this much hard?

8. I need to be more wise to spend my money.

9. I started reading third Harry Potter book. To my surprised, it was pretty easy to read.

Question

Could you please help with my sentences?🌙🌙
I want to make them sound casual and natural!!
How would you say this??

1. Ujin and I talked so much throughout the day and  it was so fun. I couldn’t help but enjoy.

2. He’s definitely not my style but I’ve kind of fallen in love with him.

3. I would enjoy tomorrow as well I’m gonna make the most out of it.

4. I like him and when he’s around my heart is beating but objectively speaking, he’s far from an attractive man and, he looks too weak.

5. Let’s be a nice person honestly I’m still not sure the definition of a nice person but I will do nice things towards this world.

6. Life is very short and I freaking know that.

7. Why is it so hard to speak English? Is it supposed to be this much hard?

8. I need to be more wise to spend my money.

9. I started reading third Harry Potter book. To my surprised, it was pretty easy to read.

Okapi14 · Accepted Answer

1: Ujin and I talked a lot throughout the day, and it was super fun. I couldn't stop feeling happy after our conversations.

2: He's definitely not my style, but I've kind of fallen in love with him. (Just need the comma)

3: I will enjoy tomorrow as well, and make the most of it.

4: I like him, and when he's around my heart beats. But, objectively speaking, he's far from and an attractive man, and looks very weak.

5: Let's be nice people. Honestly I'm still not sure the true definition of a nice person, but I will do nice things for this world.

6: Life is very short, and that is starting to freak me out.

7: Why is it so hard to speak English? Is it supposed to be very hard?

8: I need to be wiser about how I spend my money.

9: I started reading the third Harry Potter book. To my surprise, it was pretty easy to read.