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23 June
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『角にスターバックスがあり、徒歩圏内に娯楽施設が多い所に住むために、同僚や友人、親戚がどれほどの犠牲を払っているかに驚かされる。
これこそが、都心に住むことの「栄光の証」なのだ。しかし、多くの人は東京にある「ウサギ小屋」に高額の家賃を払って住んでいる。もし彼らが郊外に住めば、どれだけ多くのお金を節約できるのだろうか。』
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『角にスターバックスがあり、徒歩圏内に娯楽施設が多い所に住むために、同僚や友人、親戚がどれほどの犠牲を払っているかに驚かされる。
これこそが、都心に住むことの「栄光の証」なのだ。しかし、多くの人は東京にある「ウサギ小屋」に高額の家賃を払って住んでいる。もし彼らが郊外に住めば、どれだけ多くのお金を節約できるのだろうか。』
この文章は自然ですか？
これこそが、都心に住むことの「栄光の証」なのだ。しかし、多くの人は東京にある「ウサギ小屋」に高額の家賃を払って住んでいる。もし彼らが郊外に住めば、どれだけ多くのお金を節約できるのだろうか。』
この文章は自然ですか？
*文法と語彙の誤用やとても不自然なところなどがない限り、全文を「好み」で書き直さないでください。(添削が必要な部分だけお願いします)。
英原文:
It astounds me what sacrifices my colleagues, friends, and relatives make just so they can live in a place with a Starbucks at the corner and plentiful entertainment establishments within walking distance.
This is the “perceived glory” of inner city living. However, many people rent tiny places in Tokyo at hair-raising costs. If only they lived in the suburbs, I wonder how much more money they could probably save.
英原文:
It astounds me what sacrifices my colleagues, friends, and relatives make just so they can live in a place with a Starbucks at the corner and plentiful entertainment establishments within walking distance.
This is the “perceived glory” of inner city living. However, many people rent tiny places in Tokyo at hair-raising costs. If only they lived in the suburbs, I wonder how much more money they could probably save.
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街角にスターバックスがあり、徒歩圏内に娯楽施設が多い所に住むために、同僚や友人、親戚はどれほどの犠牲を払っていることか驚かされる。
あとはOＫです。
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@mike808
街角にスターバックスがあり、徒歩圏内に娯楽施設が多い所に住むために、同僚や友人、親戚はどれほどの犠牲を払っていることか驚かされる。
あとはOＫです。
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