11 Dec 2014
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Simplified Chinese (China)
Traditional Chinese (Taiwan)
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Question about English (US)
The preventive methods for swine flu are very successful, because the swine flu has already been controlled during this years, it is not a serious disease as before. People know how to prevent swine flu and they also go to take swine flu vaccination regularly. But even it is not an serious disease, I still recommend the local government to pay attention on it, and the government and private agency can keep providing free vaccination for citizens. If people stop to take the vaccination, they will have chance to get swine flu. I think people also need to update the information on the website about swine flu. I hope people can have a good health habit and follow the prevention that I talked before.
这个表达自然吗?
这个表达自然吗?
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Preventive methods for swine flu are very successful because swine flu has already been controlled this year; it is not as serious a disease as before. People know how to prevent swine flu and they also get swine flu vaccinations regularly. But, even though it is not a serious disease, I still recommend that local governments pay attention to it and that government and private agencies keep providing free vaccinations for citizens. If people stop getting the vaccination, they will have a chance to get swine flu. I think people also need to update information on websites about swine flu. I hope people can have good health habits and follow the prevention steps that I talked about before.
Preventive methods for swine flu are very successful because swine flu has already been controlled this year; it is not as serious a disease as before. People know how to prevent swine flu and they also get swine flu vaccinations regularly. But, even though it is not a serious disease, I still recommend that local governments pay attention to it and that government and private agencies keep providing free vaccinations for citizens. If people stop getting the vaccination, they will have a chance to get swine flu. I think people also need to update information on websites about swine flu. I hope people can have good health habits and follow the prevention steps that I talked about before.
Native language
Simplified Chinese (China)
Traditional Chinese (Taiwan)
Near fluent
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Native language
English (US)
Try this:
Preventive methods for swine flu are very successful because swine flu has already been controlled this year; it is not as serious a disease as before. People know how to prevent swine flu and they also get swine flu vaccinations regularly. But, even though it is not a serious disease, I still recommend that local governments pay attention to it and that government and private agencies keep providing free vaccinations for citizens. If people stop getting the vaccination, they will have a chance to get swine flu. I think people also need to update information on websites about swine flu. I hope people can have good health habits and follow the prevention steps that I talked about before.
Preventive methods for swine flu are very successful because swine flu has already been controlled this year; it is not as serious a disease as before. People know how to prevent swine flu and they also get swine flu vaccinations regularly. But, even though it is not a serious disease, I still recommend that local governments pay attention to it and that government and private agencies keep providing free vaccinations for citizens. If people stop getting the vaccination, they will have a chance to get swine flu. I think people also need to update information on websites about swine flu. I hope people can have good health habits and follow the prevention steps that I talked about before.
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