7 Apr 2017

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Choosing Careers
Careers are very important in our lifetime especially in nowadays.
There are two points with this.First of all,some people think parents should arrange children careers.Children are too young to choose their real life.They may take some fault choose so that destroy their life.
The second point is that children should decide their jobs by themselves.They think they have their own consideration,they can choose their own career of their like.They want to take their own life.
In my opinions,the two points are all right.We can take our own life,and should consider our parent’s advise.Through detail consider,to chose the best chose.The end,although every chose we take,we shouldn’t regret.

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