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What effect do you think this will have on the world?
I think the effect of mechanization of agriculture and industry will lead to enlarge the economic gap between the rich and the poor because machines will let most of easy jobs engaged by people in need vanish. The cheaper lauder force provided by machines will be substituted for people in need. Therefore, they will lose sources of economy while the rich will save money and have efficient productivity. Does this sound natural?
I think the effect of mechanization of agriculture and industry will lead to enlarge the economic gap between the rich and the poor because machines will let most of easy jobs engaged by people in need vanish. The cheaper lauder force provided by machines will be substituted for people in need. Therefore, they will lose sources of economy while the rich will save money and have efficient productivity. Does this sound natural?
- English (US)
Natural
Some things sound awkward or incorrect. For example:
"industry will lead to enlarge the economic gap" should be "industry will enlarge the economic gap". "they will lose sources of economy" should be "they will lose sources of income".
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