Please correct the follow sentences naturally. In order to satisfy my desire to communicate with various kinds of people, I had two part time jobs, which are at a cram school in a temple and at a nursing-...

9 Feb 2016

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Please correct the follow sentences naturally.

In order to satisfy my desire to communicate with various kinds of people, I had two part time jobs, which are at a cram school in a temple and at a nursing-center for the elderly. Working with a cram school, I created the system to motivate children through trial and error. At a nursing-center, I basically provide care for excretion, meals and for other daily activities.

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