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Hello.
I'm practicing to write or speak long sentence.
This is a quite long sentence, and I hope somebody will correct this:D



When I was walking around my home, I saw a woman she was standing at just besides a pond. In her left hand I saw a plastic bag seemed she just bought something, while I couldn't see her right hand for some greens are there between us.

Here, imagine, a woman is standing with her dog having a plastic bag on her way back home from small shopping and staring at her dog waiting dog's urinating or defecating. Her posture was exactly the same as that kind.

I thought she was with her dog, because I couldn't see her right hand and she was staring at below. But I knew where the boundary of pond is and if she was with her dog, all these positions are something strange, she was too close to the pond, for she was staring at below and its direction was toward the pond seemed looking at her dog urinating or defecating or whatever. So I was wondering all these positioning, and I passed the greens, eventually I saw her right hand and what I saw in her right hand was fishing rod! She was fishing! I've never seen a fisher man who is standing straightly while having a plastic bag looks really on way back home from small shopping. So I was kind of astonished and my countenance would be full of smiling with a little suppressed.

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Hello.
I'm practicing to write or speak long sentence.
This is a quite long sentence, and I hope somebody will correct this:D



When I was walking around my home, I saw a woman she was standing at just besides a pond. In her left hand I saw a plastic bag seemed she just bought something, while I couldn't see her right hand for some greens are there between us. 

Here, imagine, a woman is standing with her dog having a plastic bag on her way back home from small shopping and staring at her dog waiting dog's urinating or defecating. Her posture was exactly the same as that kind.

I thought she was with her dog, because I couldn't see her right hand and she was staring at below. But I knew where the boundary of pond is and if she was with her dog, all these positions are something strange, she was too close to the pond, for she was staring at below and its direction was toward the pond seemed looking at her dog urinating or defecating or whatever. So I was wondering all these positioning, and I passed the greens, eventually I saw her right hand and what I saw in her right hand was fishing rod! She was fishing! I've never seen a fisher man who is standing straightly while having a plastic bag looks really on way back home from small shopping. So I was kind of astonished and my countenance would be full of smiling with a little suppressed.
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