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18 May 2017
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It is because I was moved by a documentary of Polish orphans detained in Siberia one hundred years ago. Although I was impressed by the support from Japanese government, I was more impressed by Polish people who have never forgotten their appreciation to Japan. And it is because Polish families invited and took care of Japanese children to heal their traumatized mind after they had lost their parents by the horrible earthquake. And it is also because I watched a video of the Warszawa uprising. Does this sound natural?
It is because I was moved by a documentary of Polish orphans detained in Siberia one hundred years ago. Although I was impressed by the support from Japanese government, I was more impressed by Polish people who have never forgotten their appreciation to Japan. And it is because Polish families invited and took care of Japanese children to heal their traumatized mind after they had lost their parents by the horrible earthquake. And it is also because I watched a video of the Warszawa uprising. Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
*I was moved by the documentary of Polish orphans detained in Siberia one hundred years ago. I was impressed by the support from the Japanese government however i was more impressed by the Polish people who have never forgotten their appreciation towards Japan. This was demonstrated by Polish families inviting and taking care of Japanese children to heal them from their traumatized minds after losing their parents by the horrible earthquake. I was probably move more-so because i also watched Warszawa uprising.
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Would you please correct the sentences to make them sound natural.
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A little unnatural
*I was moved by the documentary of Polish orphans detained in Siberia one hundred years ago. I was impressed by the support from the Japanese government however i was more impressed by the Polish people who have never forgotten their appreciation towards Japan. This was demonstrated by Polish families inviting and taking care of Japanese children to heal them from their traumatized minds after losing their parents by the horrible earthquake. I was probably move more-so because i also watched Warszawa uprising.
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