I'm love all animals of the earth. I can't choosing one kind. They are give shiny eyes and wet nose, vibrant motion anything. I'm since child hood get excited about animals. I do go to movie premiers. Name is zootopia. It sounds like so much fun! I'm really, really glad I met autumn. See you tomorrow~

나는 지구에 사는 모든 동물을 사랑한다. 그래서 한 종류만 산택할 수 없다. 그들의 빛나는 눈과 촉촉한 코 활동적인 움직임 모든것이 좋다. 나는 어렸을 때부터 동물과 관련된 일에 미친다. 개봉한 영화를 보러 갈것이다. 이름은 주토피아다. 매우 재미있을것 같다.
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I'm love all animals of the earth. I can't choosing one kind. They are give shiny eyes and wet nose, vibrant motion anything. I'm since child hood get excited about animals. I do go to movie premiers. Name is zootopia. It sounds like so much fun! I'm really, really glad I met autumn. See you tomorrow~

나는 지구에 사는 모든 동물을 사랑한다. 그래서 한 종류만 산택할 수 없다. 그들의 빛나는 눈과 촉촉한 코 활동적인 움직임 모든것이 좋다. 나는 어렸을 때부터 동물과 관련된 일에 미친다. 개봉한 영화를 보러 갈것이다. 이름은 주토피아다. 매우 재미있을것 같다.
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kanra · Answer

"I love all animals of the earth. I can't choose one kind. They make my eyes well with tears. Since my childhood, I have always gotten excited about animals. I am going to a movie. The name of the movie is Zootopia. It sounds like so much fun! I'm really, really glad I met autumn. See you tomorrow~" sounds better.

dianastott · Answer

Your first Sentence could change to "I love all animals of the earth" followed by "I can't choose one kind". 
"They have shiny eyes, wet noses, and vibrant motions." When making a list in english, if there are more things bein listed you can separate them with a comma (,) to make it more natural.

"I saw the movie premier for Zootopia"

I don't speak Korean so I am not sure what you were trying to say for the last part.

You are on the right track! Most of it was very good, there were just a few key words you could change to make it sound more natural. Good job!

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