Coffee shop owner let part time applicant and part timer drank juice. But he put sleeping pills into the juice seceretly. Victims are 16 girls in total. He commited sexual harassment and raped them while the... does this sound natural?

7 Jan 2015

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Coffee shop owner let part time applicant and part timer drank juice. But he put sleeping pills into the juice seceretly. Victims are 16 girls in total. He commited sexual harassment and raped them while they are sleeping. Finally he got caught by police due to disclosure of one of victims.








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