Though The Times Though... Now I feel sadness, shed my tears, I think I will never smile... though... There'll be a time when I'll be able to talk about my story and laugh eventually. So... don't sulk...l... does this sound natural?

10 Jun 2017

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Though The Times

Though... Now I feel sadness, shed my tears, I think I will never smile... though...

There'll be a time when I'll be able to talk about my story and laugh eventually.
So... don't sulk...let's breath the air of today.

Times are looping and looping.
Being happy and sad come around and come around.
Parted couples are on the way to meeting in the next loop of a time and be reborn.

People on the journey hope to find their soul town.
If they collapse and today's rains were extremely cold though, they'd open doors.

Times are looping and looping.
Meeting and parting come around and come around.
Worn out people on journeys are on the way to the next loop of a time and be reborn.

If people on the journey collapse though, they'll start another journey and be reborn.
does this sound natural?

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