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19 Jun 2017

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I born with two ears eyes hands and feets,
I was so excited to enjoy this world feasts,
but then something went wrong,
my house shifted into rest home,
bed is here but not mine it's carrying bed
my body is now full of needle marks
I live now with foster staff
I wish I could live a normal life
like all
I wish I was free from all this everyday pain
I saw people and kids running laughing and living
I found you all so lucky..



this is a para for cancer patient correct my grammar mistakes and correct my all mistakes ryt now pleaseeeeeee pleaseeeee I want this to ryt quickly
don't mark natural or little natural write where I'm wrong in the comment below waiting guys
does this sound natural?

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