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From today, I started "Journalling" which is how to prove English skills that I watched in YouTube. It's first day today for me, so I don't know what I should write. Anyway, I'll try hard. At first, I would like to introduce myself. I was born at Awaji island witch is small island surrounded sea in Japan. It has a lot of beautiful nature. So I used to catch a insect in forest and swim in the sea. Because of it, I love nature environment.
I'm crazy for rock climbing now. Especially, bouldering style. I've been to Yosemite national park which is the most famous climbing area in the world twice. That was so amazing experience for me. I definitely will go back again.
If there is wrong sentence, please let me know. And, could you correct it please? Does this sound natural?
I'm crazy for rock climbing now. Especially, bouldering style. I've been to Yosemite national park which is the most famous climbing area in the world twice. That was so amazing experience for me. I definitely will go back again.
If there is wrong sentence, please let me know. And, could you correct it please? Does this sound natural?
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Today I started "journalling" to improve my English skills that i learned from youtube. Today's the first day, so i don't know what to write. Anyway, i'll try hard. First I would like to introduce myself. I was born on Awaji island, which is a small island in Japan that is surrounded by the sea. It has a lot of beautiful nature. I used to catch a lot of insects in the forest, and swim in the sea. Because of that, I love nature. I'm crazy about rock climbing right now. Especially bouldering style. I've been to Yosemite National Park twice, which is the most famous climbing area in the world. That was an amazing experience for me. I will definitely go back again.
I hope that helps you.
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Today I started "journalling" to improve my English skills that i learned from youtube. Today's the first day, so i don't know what to write. Anyway, i'll try hard. First I would like to introduce myself. I was born on Awaji island, which is a small island in Japan that is surrounded by the sea. It has a lot of beautiful nature. I used to catch a lot of insects in the forest, and swim in the sea. Because of that, I love nature. I'm crazy about rock climbing right now. Especially bouldering style. I've been to Yosemite National Park twice, which is the most famous climbing area in the world. That was an amazing experience for me. I will definitely go back again.
I hope that helps you.
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@Ryoclimber your welcome, i am happy to help. good luck practicing.
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