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Updated on
30 Jun 2017
- Japanese
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English (US)
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German
Question about English (US)
Dear My friends in Germany.
I am going to leave NY
I spent time at here NY almost 5 years and a half.
I could not speak very well yet.
Thank you for all you guys kindness and great support.
Goodbyes are not really goodbyes, but just the beginning of a better life.
I hope we’ll meet again someday.
You sincerely.
Please arrange to best sentences. Does this sound natural?
Dear My friends in Germany.
I am going to leave NY
I spent time at here NY almost 5 years and a half.
I could not speak very well yet.
Thank you for all you guys kindness and great support.
Goodbyes are not really goodbyes, but just the beginning of a better life.
I hope we’ll meet again someday.
You sincerely.
Please arrange to best sentences. Does this sound natural?
I am going to leave NY
I spent time at here NY almost 5 years and a half.
I could not speak very well yet.
Thank you for all you guys kindness and great support.
Goodbyes are not really goodbyes, but just the beginning of a better life.
I hope we’ll meet again someday.
You sincerely.
Please arrange to best sentences. Does this sound natural?
Answers
30 Jun 2017
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- English (US)
- Spanish (Mexico)
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Dear friends in Germany,
I am going to leave NY after staying here for almost 5 and a half years. I can't speak very well yet but I hope to improve. Thank you guys for your kindness and support! These goodbyes are not really goodbyes, but just the beginning of a new chapter in life. I hope we meet again some day!
Sincerely,
Your Name
This would sound much better, I think :)
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- English (US)
Unnatural
Dear Germany friends,
I am leaving NY!
I have spent almost five and a half years here.
I have not been able to speak very well, yet.
Thank you guys for all your great support and kindness!
Goodbyes are not really goodbyes, but just the beginning of a new era of life.
I hope we'll meet again someday!
Sincerely,
Your Name
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Dear friends in Germany,
I am going to leave NY after staying here for almost 5 and a half years. I can't speak very well yet but I hope to improve. Thank you guys for your kindness and support! These goodbyes are not really goodbyes, but just the beginning of a new chapter in life. I hope we meet again some day!
Sincerely,
Your Name
This would sound much better, I think :)
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- English (US)
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I had mistake
What I want to say as the first
Dear my friends live in US but not only American.
What I want to say as the first
Dear my friends live in US but not only American.
- English (US)
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@Nackii Dear friends of US residence
Kind of a more advanced way of saying it but it makes a lot of sense. :)
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