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2 Jul 2017

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Do you know how to better sentence than this?

In a few years ago.
My parents stayed japanese style hotel is called Ryokan to enjoy hot spring.
My mother went to hot spring as soon as they arrived.
She took off her clothes and her glasses at dressing room.
Then,She found open air hot spring at out of window.
"oh,amazing.Good hotel"
She went to hot spring throughed bushes.
There was nobody.
"I'm first.I'm lucky"
She entered to hot spring.
"Cold!!!"
She shouted and looked around.
She understood.
This is the pond!
This is the garden!
I'm naked!
My mother's eye are not good sight.
She has sometime funny misstake.

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