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13 Apr 2016
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Please check my today's diary.
Today was my first daughter's entrance ceremony day .
We really wanted this day.
It was the first day of her elementary school life.
She looked very happy.
After backed home,I wrote her name on her every things,such as new textbook pencils shose and so on.
I have to cook her lunch from tomorrow morning.
I will be busy from now!!
Please check my today's diary.
Today was my first daughter's entrance ceremony day .
We really wanted this day.
It was the first day of her elementary school life.
She looked very happy.
After backed home,I wrote her name on her every things,such as new textbook pencils shose and so on.
I have to cook her lunch from tomorrow morning.
I will be busy from now!!
Today was my first daughter's entrance ceremony day .
We really wanted this day.
It was the first day of her elementary school life.
She looked very happy.
After backed home,I wrote her name on her every things,such as new textbook pencils shose and so on.
I have to cook her lunch from tomorrow morning.
I will be busy from now!!
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Good job! There were some words that sounded mre natural/I fixed a few mistakes.
"Today was my ELDEST daughter's entrance cermony. We really LOOKED FORWARD to thisvday. It was her first day of elementary school. She looked very happy. After WE RETURNED home, I wrote her name on ALL her thomgs, such as her new texbook, pencils, shoes and so on. I have to PREPARE her lunch (or cook lunch for her) starting from tomorrow morning. I will be busy from now ON!!"
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Congratualtions to your daughter! ^_^
Here are some corrections
"Today was my daughter's first entrance ceremony day"
"After we got back home, I wrote her name on all her things such as new textbooks, pencils, shoes and so on"
"I will (or I'll) have to cook her lunch starting tomorrow morning"
"I will be busy from now onwards!!"
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Good job! There were some words that sounded mre natural/I fixed a few mistakes.
"Today was my ELDEST daughter's entrance cermony. We really LOOKED FORWARD to thisvday. It was her first day of elementary school. She looked very happy. After WE RETURNED home, I wrote her name on ALL her thomgs, such as her new texbook, pencils, shoes and so on. I have to PREPARE her lunch (or cook lunch for her) starting from tomorrow morning. I will be busy from now ON!!"
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