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7 Jul 2017
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I and my wife squabbled seriously last night for just something so trivial,I had only slept for less than 4hours, early in the morning,I could hardly wait to get up and escape from my house, She had promised that she would perform well in order to persuade me to remarry (we got divorced 2months ago for endless squabbles) Now I sit in KFC, I have no idea where I should go at 6 o'clock in the Saturday morning
I and my wife squabbled seriously last night for just something so trivial,I had only slept for less than 4hours, early in the morning,I could hardly wait to get up and escape from my house, She had promised that she would perform well in order to persuade me to remarry (we got divorced 2months ago for endless squabbles) Now I sit in KFC, I have no idea where I should go at 6 o'clock in the Saturday morning
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8 Jul 2017
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Sentences are okay and easy to understand. Just place some period to cut each thought and end the sentence.
I and my wife (My wife and I) squabbled seriously last night for something so trivial. I had only slept for less than 4 hours. Early in the morning, I can't hardly wait to get up and leave the house. She made a promise that she will improve herself and persuade me to remarry. (You can add a sentence here like... I guess, it's hard for people who are so used to things the way they are) And now, at 6 o'clock in a Saturday morning, I'm here sitting in KFC with no idea where to go.
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Sentences are okay and easy to understand. Just place some period to cut each thought and end the sentence.
I and my wife (My wife and I) squabbled seriously last night for something so trivial. I had only slept for less than 4 hours. Early in the morning, I can't hardly wait to get up and leave the house. She made a promise that she will improve herself and persuade me to remarry. (You can add a sentence here like... I guess, it's hard for people who are so used to things the way they are) And now, at 6 o'clock in a Saturday morning, I'm here sitting in KFC with no idea where to go.
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@supersoonique Thank you for your help ,I really appreciate it.I thought no one would care about my miserable experience, thanks a lot for your correction.
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@FranklinChenney Happy to help you! Hope you'll be able resolve things together...all the best
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@supersoonique It's really kind of you, God bless you.I am gonna try to resolve this problem,I just feel a little frustrated at this time. Thanks for your encouragement
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