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trojanbird
16 Apr 2016

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今宵外には風はいつもよりもっと強そうだが、家中は居心地がよくて幸せ。 does this sound natural?

The wind outside tonight seems stronger than usual, but it's nice and cozy in the house, so I'm happy.
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wpc
16 Apr 2016

  • Japanese

A little unnatural

old
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wpc
16 Apr 2016

  • Japanese

A little unnatural

But I love this expression.

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trojanbird
16 Apr 2016

  • English (US)
Wait, what sounds old? >.<' I didn't realize I used an outdated expression...
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wpc
16 Apr 2016

  • Japanese

A little unnatural

今宵 、家中 make me feel the past. And だが is a little stiff expression.

to write a little bit more modern expression,

今夜、外はいつもよりも風が強いようだけれど、家の中は居心地がよくて幸せです。

Romaji
koyoi , iejuu make me feel the past . And da ga is a little stiff expression .

to write a little bit more modern expression ,

konya , soto ha itsumo yori mo kaze ga tsuyoi you da keredo , ie no naka ha igokochi ga yoku te siawase desu .
Hiragana
こよい 、 いえじゅう make me feel the past . And だ が is a little stiff expression .

to write a little bit more modern expression ,

こんや 、 そと は いつも より も かぜ が つよい よう だ けれど 、 いえ の なか は いごこち が よく て しあわせ です 。

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