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19 Apr 2016

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Could you please correct my journal?
Here is my writing.

The silver bullet made my lingering
cough stopped at the drop of a hot that was a specific medicine. I really appriciated that my pulmonology doctor gave me the right proper treatment which I had bronchitis caused by a seasnal allergy. I feel saved my life. Health means everything.

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