Could you please correct my diary? Can you make it sound as natural as native speakers? It's time to raise up that carp-shaped stremers out it's called Koinobori for celebrating for children grows. I stopp...

19 Apr 2016

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Could you please correct my diary?
Can you make it sound as natural as native speakers?
It's time to raise up that carp-shaped stremers out it's called Koinobori for celebrating for children grows. I stopped and I thought it might be a good timing to take pix under the perfect blue sky, but Koinobori seemed to look sleeping because there wasn't wind to flapping!

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