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I love ramen.
I prefer ramen is seafood base and hard noodles and mild spices.
I put on boil egg how I feel at the time.
I recommend ramen shop is Kai Jin.
Kai Jin ramen have seafood base.And hard and thin noodles.Mild taste.
Put on spring onion and two balls.
White ball is mashed chicken.
Pink ball is mashed shrimp.
After finish noodles put on baked onigiri.Onigiri is rice ball.
The taste is great.
Kai Jin in front of Shinjuku station.
Everyday a line of people waiting. Does this sound natural?
I prefer ramen is seafood base and hard noodles and mild spices.
I put on boil egg how I feel at the time.
I recommend ramen shop is Kai Jin.
Kai Jin ramen have seafood base.And hard and thin noodles.Mild taste.
Put on spring onion and two balls.
White ball is mashed chicken.
Pink ball is mashed shrimp.
After finish noodles put on baked onigiri.Onigiri is rice ball.
The taste is great.
Kai Jin in front of Shinjuku station.
Everyday a line of people waiting. Does this sound natural?
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"I love ramen. My favorite type of ramen has a seafood base, hard noodles, and mild spices. I'll also add a boiled egg if I want one.
The ramen shop I recommend is called Kai Jin. Their ramen has a seafood base, and hard, thin noodles. It also has a mild taste.
I like to add spring onions, mashed chicken and shrimp, and a rice ball, called onigiri. The ramen tastes great!
Kai Jin is located in front of Shinjuku Station. Everyday, there is always a line of people waiting to eat there!"
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- English (US)
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"I love ramen. My favorite type of ramen has a seafood base, hard noodles, and mild spices. I'll also add a boiled egg if I want one.
The ramen shop I recommend is called Kai Jin. Their ramen has a seafood base, and hard, thin noodles. It also has a mild taste.
I like to add spring onions, mashed chicken and shrimp, and a rice ball, called onigiri. The ramen tastes great!
Kai Jin is located in front of Shinjuku Station. Everyday, there is always a line of people waiting to eat there!"
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@EIKAWA You're welcome! I suggest that you write sentences in paragraphs, instead of on separate lines. (This is more correct, and it is easier to read!)
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