Tom is a timid linkboy. One night, a spooky man walks up to him and asks him for help. The man i... does this sound natural?

27 Jan 2015

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Tom is a timid linkboy.
One night, a spooky man walks up to him and asks him for help. The man is a stranger. So, he wants to find a inn. Tom is scared, because he looks like a ghost, but he has to his work. Tom guides to a inn with the man. While he walking to inn, he can't hear the man's footsteps. So,he looks at behind the man, but the man disappears. Maybe, the man is really ghost, so tom escapes to a policestation. 이 표현은 자연스럽습니까?
does this sound natural?

Native language
Korean

Native language
English (UK) English (US) Latin Near fluent

Native language
Korean

Native language
English (UK) English (US) Latin Near fluent
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