I am a sophomore in a liberal arts college, major in classic, my lessons in this semester are most about philosophy, such as Aristotle, Descartes and Chinese philosophies like neo-confucianism.
In my spare time I love to immerse myself in a good book. The majority books I read are on literature. My favorite writer is Haruki Murakami，I also read the poems of Jorge Luis Borges and Pablo Neruda.
I like outdoor activities as well as reading. Cycling and climbing are what I do mostly in my hometown. During holiday, I travelled a lot. I had visited many places in China before, and I plan to travel to USA this year , for this plan, I am preparing my visa application this days, and worrying about the visa interview! Do you guys have any suggestion for me?
Sorry for my poor English and thanks for your correction. does this sound natural?

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I am a sophomore in a liberal arts college, major in classic, my lessons in this semester are most about philosophy, such as Aristotle, Descartes and Chinese philosophies like neo-confucianism. 
In my spare time I love to immerse myself in a good book. The majority books I read are on literature. My favorite writer is Haruki Murakami，I also read the poems of Jorge Luis Borges and Pablo Neruda. 
I like outdoor activities as well as reading. Cycling and climbing are what I do mostly in my hometown. During holiday, I travelled a lot. I had visited many places in China before, and I plan to travel to USA this year , for this plan, I am preparing my visa application this days, and worrying about the visa interview! Do you guys have any suggestion for me?
Sorry for my poor English and thanks for your correction. does this sound natural?

somanxsomin · Accepted Answer

Different options:
- I am a second year classics major/a sophomore majoring in classics at a liberal arts college.
- My lessons this semester are mostly on philosophy
- The majority of books I read is
- Haruki Murakami, but I also read poems/poetry by
- what I mostly do in my hometown
- During holidays/breaks/vacations, I travel a lot
- I have visited
- this year. For this plan, these days I am preparing to apply for a visa and worrying about the interview
- any suggestions

nananabi · Answer

I am a sophomore at a liberal arts college majoring in classic(what?). My classes this semester are mostly about philosophy; such as Aristotle, Descartes and Chinese philosophies like neo-confucianism. 
In my spare time, I love to immerse myself in a good book. The majority of books I read are about literature. My favorite writer is Haruki Murakami. I also read poems by Jorge Luis Borges and Pablo Neruda. 
I like outdoor activities also. Cycling and climbing are activities that I do mostly in my hometown. During holidays, I travel a lot. I visited many places in China before and I plan to travel the US (US is more natural than saying USA) this year therefore I am currently preparing my visa application and worrying about the visa interview! Do you guys have any suggestions for me?

There are many different ways to rewrite this but this is simple!