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Can somebody help correct my japanese? (I feel like this paragraph is a little bit all over the place)
それだけでなく、私はいつもより多くの友達を作って、私が学んだ日本語の言葉も実装できるように努めています。日本で働くには、自分の意見で最も挑戦的なビジネス言語を習得しなければならないことは明らかです。そのために、私は1日に1つのフレーズを覚える時間を作って、時には友達に自分の間違いを訂正するよう依頼します。
Not only that, i am also constantly trying to make more friends so that i can also implement japanese language that i have learned. And to work in Japan, it is obvious that i also have to master the business language which is the most challenging in my opinion. For that, i make time to memorize one phrase per day and sometimes will also ask my friends to correct my mistakes as well.
Can somebody help correct my japanese? (I feel like this paragraph is a little bit all over the place)
それだけでなく、私はいつもより多くの友達を作って、私が学んだ日本語の言葉も実装できるように努めています。日本で働くには、自分の意見で最も挑戦的なビジネス言語を習得しなければならないことは明らかです。そのために、私は1日に1つのフレーズを覚える時間を作って、時には友達に自分の間違いを訂正するよう依頼します。
Not only that, i am also constantly trying to make more friends so that i can also implement japanese language that i have learned. And to work in Japan, it is obvious that i also have to master the business language which is the most challenging in my opinion. For that, i make time to memorize one phrase per day and sometimes will also ask my friends to correct my mistakes as well.
それだけでなく、私はいつもより多くの友達を作って、私が学んだ日本語の言葉も実装できるように努めています。日本で働くには、自分の意見で最も挑戦的なビジネス言語を習得しなければならないことは明らかです。そのために、私は1日に1つのフレーズを覚える時間を作って、時には友達に自分の間違いを訂正するよう依頼します。
Not only that, i am also constantly trying to make more friends so that i can also implement japanese language that i have learned. And to work in Japan, it is obvious that i also have to master the business language which is the most challenging in my opinion. For that, i make time to memorize one phrase per day and sometimes will also ask my friends to correct my mistakes as well.
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hello again
implement is close in meaning with "use", right?
私はより多くの
私が学んだ
→cut off 私が
学んだ日本語を実際に使えるように努めています
日本で働く上で、最も大きな課題だと私が思うのは、ビジネス用語を日本語で理解することです。
In my opinion, this is not the case, though. Tons of business terms are not translated in Japanese, and used as it is.
like
ベネフィット、ビーアンドビー、カスタマー
for benefits, b and b, costomer.
ときには友人に間違いを直してもらうようにお願いすることもあります。
In addition, this one seems formal, so you should use 友人 not 友達.
友達 sounds casual.
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hello again
implement is close in meaning with "use", right?
私はより多くの
私が学んだ
→cut off 私が
学んだ日本語を実際に使えるように努めています
日本で働く上で、最も大きな課題だと私が思うのは、ビジネス用語を日本語で理解することです。
In my opinion, this is not the case, though. Tons of business terms are not translated in Japanese, and used as it is.
like
ベネフィット、ビーアンドビー、カスタマー
for benefits, b and b, costomer.
ときには友人に間違いを直してもらうようにお願いすることもあります。
In addition, this one seems formal, so you should use 友人 not 友達.
友達 sounds casual.
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hi, again.
Business language is more like, ご存知でしょうか？more towards the 敬語 part?
I should have just used 敬語 shouldn't I? hahaha
@yamamoto_yama
Business language is more like, ご存知でしょうか？more towards the 敬語 part?
I should have just used 敬語 shouldn't I? hahaha
@yamamoto_yama
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oh it was not business terms but 敬語!
gotcha
最も大きな課題だと私が思うのは敬語の習得です。
how is this?
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