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English (US)
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English (UK)
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Simplified Chinese (China)
"He thought that the soldiers won’t be able do their best in a battle if they left their wife, so the king forbid the soldiers from getting married." Does this sound natural?
- English (US)
- Simplified Chinese (China)
- Traditional Chinese (Hong Kong)
Natural
"Won't" --> "wouldn't"
"Wife" --> "wives"
The second "the soldiers" --> "them"
Just some tiny tweaks ( °◡͐°)
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