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3 Oct 2017
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November 3rd, the day when I argued with the immigration officer over the mobile phone at Narita, is approaching. Does this sound natural?
November 3rd, the day when I argued with the immigration officer over the mobile phone at Narita, is approaching. Does this sound natural?
While surfing the Internet, I found the above sentence. I wonder if it makes sense.
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3 Oct 2017
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A little unnatural
@Just4 “the mobile phone” ——> “the phone”
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A little unnatural
“November 3rd, the day when I argued with the immigration officer over the phone at Narita, is approaching.”
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@lovelystudent Thank you very much. Which part of the sentence can you change so that it sounds better?
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A little unnatural
@Just4 “the mobile phone” ——> “the phone”
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