12 Oct 2017

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Would you correct following my diary?

Today is the 48th day since I started writing this diary.
I attended my English class and discussed economy in Switzerland with my teacher. Switzerland is placed first on the competitive economy。The reason why it is placed first is because it always maintains good infrastructure, education, and institution.
Japan is placed ninth. It is good, but I feel that the gap between rich and poor is growing in Japan now. So I concern about future of economy in Japan.
Okay, it is time to wrap up this diary entry.

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