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The feedback of my integrative summary clarifies which area to focus on to improve my writing skills; sentence structures, referencing, and in-text commenting. Overall, I received many comments asking for the clarity of my sentences with the use of succinct expression. Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
@naa The feedback on my integrative summary clarifies which area to focus on to improve my writing skills; sentence structures, referencing, and in-text commenting. Overall, I received many comments asking for more clarity in my sentences with the use of succinct expressions.
(BTW I think the academic style you have been learning tends to be unclear. I mean, even when it's written by English natives it is still quite obscure. I much prefer clear English, but it's too simple for some people. 🙂🎶)
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A little unnatural
@naa The feedback on my integrative summary clarifies which area to focus on to improve my writing skills; sentence structures, referencing, and in-text commenting. Overall, I received many comments asking for more clarity in my sentences with the use of succinct expressions.
(BTW I think the academic style you have been learning tends to be unclear. I mean, even when it's written by English natives it is still quite obscure. I much prefer clear English, but it's too simple for some people. 🙂🎶)
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