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6 Jun 2016
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It is now twenty four years since the office has been established in the Philippines, the number of Philippine staff who involved in the production process of the animated TV series One Piece is greater than Japanese staff. Does this sound natural?
It is now twenty four years since the office has been established in the Philippines, the number of Philippine staff who involved in the production process of the animated TV series One Piece is greater than Japanese staff. Does this sound natural?
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6 Jun 2016
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I didn't know that... very interesting!
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I didn't know that... very interesting!
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@Igirisujin Thank you very much! :)
If you would, please refer to this.
http://lang-8.com/1596836
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A little unnatural
The two sentences should be separated with a full stop [.] rather than a comma [,]
Also the second sentence would be better as either: (1) "The number of Philippine staff who are involved in the production of the animated TV series One Piece is greater than the Japanese staff" or (2) "The number of Philippine staff involved in the production of the animated TV series One Piece is greater than the Japanese staff"
'production' is simpler to use than 'production process'
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@obaka: I will look at that page later, I need to register to see it.
I have to say, I was so interested in what you wrote I missed the points @tooni29 noticed. She is absolutely right. : )
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@obaka Ah, I can see it on my laptop. That is very interesting. Thank you so much.
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@tooni29 @Igirisujin
Thank you for giving me helpful explanations.
Thanks to you, I really got it. :)
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