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can you check it? and, please, correct any mistakes.
During my first week at PWSZ I was quite terrified. It was very stressful time although there were some advantages which made me excited.
First of all, I was lonely at the very beginning because I did not know anyone. Fortunately, on the first lecture, I met a girl and we have a good contact til today. I was very glad since it lowered my stress a bit.
Secondly, I was afraid of all those upcoming presentations and I knen I would have to learn a lot and spend my spare time on doing exercises instead of other, much more interesting things.
There was also a bright side of going to college. I am making new friends now and I have an awareness that I am following my dreams hence it is good for me and my future.
To sum up, the first week at PWSZ was stresfull and hard but I dealt with it and now I am enjoying every day I spent here and I am happy I can learn at this very college.
can you check it? and, please, correct any mistakes.
During my first week at PWSZ I was quite terrified. It was very stressful time although there were some advantages which made me excited.
First of all, I was lonely at the very beginning because I did not know anyone. Fortunately, on the first lecture, I met a girl and we have a good contact til today. I was very glad since it lowered my stress a bit.
Secondly, I was afraid of all those upcoming presentations and I knen I would have to learn a lot and spend my spare time on doing exercises instead of other, much more interesting things.
There was also a bright side of going to college. I am making new friends now and I have an awareness that I am following my dreams hence it is good for me and my future.
To sum up, the first week at PWSZ was stresfull and hard but I dealt with it and now I am enjoying every day I spent here and I am happy I can learn at this very college.
During my first week at PWSZ I was quite terrified. It was very stressful time although there were some advantages which made me excited.
First of all, I was lonely at the very beginning because I did not know anyone. Fortunately, on the first lecture, I met a girl and we have a good contact til today. I was very glad since it lowered my stress a bit.
Secondly, I was afraid of all those upcoming presentations and I knen I would have to learn a lot and spend my spare time on doing exercises instead of other, much more interesting things.
There was also a bright side of going to college. I am making new friends now and I have an awareness that I am following my dreams hence it is good for me and my future.
To sum up, the first week at PWSZ was stresfull and hard but I dealt with it and now I am enjoying every day I spent here and I am happy I can learn at this very college.
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@mielicja very nice. I did a bit of a re-edit to make it sound more natural. I hope it makes sense.
I was quite terrified during my first week at PWSZ. It was a very stressful time although there were some positives which I was excited about.
I was lonely at the very beginning because I did not know anyone. Fortunately, I met a girl at the first lecture and we have remained in contact ever since. I was so glad we met because having a friend reduced my stress levels.
Secondly, I was afraid of all the upcoming presentations. I knew I would have to learn a lot and spend my spare time doing exercises instead of other seemingly more interesting things.
There was also a bright side of going to college. I’m making new friends now and I’m aware that I am following my dreams so it’s good for me and my future., the first week at PWSZ was stresfull and hard but I dealt with it and now I am enjoying every day I spent here and I am happy I can learn at this very college.
Although it was difficult at the beginning I managed to cope and now I am enjoying every day I spend here. I am happy I have the opportunity to learn at this college.
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@mielicja very nice. I did a bit of a re-edit to make it sound more natural. I hope it makes sense.
I was quite terrified during my first week at PWSZ. It was a very stressful time although there were some positives which I was excited about.
I was lonely at the very beginning because I did not know anyone. Fortunately, I met a girl at the first lecture and we have remained in contact ever since. I was so glad we met because having a friend reduced my stress levels.
Secondly, I was afraid of all the upcoming presentations. I knew I would have to learn a lot and spend my spare time doing exercises instead of other seemingly more interesting things.
There was also a bright side of going to college. I’m making new friends now and I’m aware that I am following my dreams so it’s good for me and my future., the first week at PWSZ was stresfull and hard but I dealt with it and now I am enjoying every day I spent here and I am happy I can learn at this very college.
Although it was difficult at the beginning I managed to cope and now I am enjoying every day I spend here. I am happy I have the opportunity to learn at this college.
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@mielicja yes there were some mistakes and areas you could have said things clearer. What I mean is that they were not so much mistakes but just sounded a bit stiff and unnatural. If you put the versions side by side you should be able to see.
The red highlights are mistakes and the yellow is just unnatural.
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