14 Jun 2016

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Hello Beth! This is Tomm calling your back.
I just got your message that it was successful for our fundraising goal which can be repair our football field.
I'm so glad to hear that and understand that you have been looking for a way to express how thankful.
There are some ideas what I thought.
First of all, we offer free ticket to them and they will be delighted because they are surly interested in the football as fans.
Secondly, we send thank you cars to people who have donated as soon as possible. These are my suggestions, if you come up with something of it, pleas feel free to contact me.
does this sound natural?

Would you please correct my English if there is something wrong.
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