86.Could you check and correct my English? What I did today. Day86(nov10). I headed to school as usual. I have long afternoon break on Friday so I headed to the gym. It was chest day. I started with middle... does this sound natural?

10 Nov 2017

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86.Could you check and correct my English?

What I did today. Day86(nov10).
I headed to school as usual. I have long afternoon break on Friday so I headed to the gym. It was chest day. I started with middle chest exercises. Then I worked upper chest. I could good work today. I've been motivated for workout these day. School finished and I waited for train then there were some guys who were drinking. They fed to a cat their snacks. Then they fed alcohols to the cat. Alcohols is bad for cats. I got pissed off. I gave them warning. I often do like this. I'm not strong mentally and physically so I always regret after doing it. I'm gonna command my passion as long as I can but I never ever forgive animal cruelty.
does this sound natural?

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