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Dear colleague, How many times have you rushed around to go to the nearest Starbucks and not be late to the office at the same time? Well... I'd like to announce that from the next month, you are spared from this! You will find anything you need, from a toasted bagel and fresh yoghurt to scrambled eggs! Are you ready for it? Just thinking about the menu keeps me screaming: "Yummie"! How delicious it must be, to have all the delicious drinks like tea, coffee along with fresh fruit, cereals and doughnuts! Moreover, you will have one hot item every day, may it be potatoes or pancakes with maple syrup. By now, you are probably wondering, why we have decided to offer a free meal. Well, apart from being generous, we are concerned about socializing. We want each and every one of you to get to know your teammates, and, who knows, maybe you will make a new friend or meet a new love? It's up to you! And of course, breakfast is the most important meal of the day, which energizes you and keeps you fresh! Hopefully, you will like our idea and see you soon!
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