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Please, correct my small story. Thank you!

It was Friday night and we were very tired after workweek. We were sitting near the fireplace, drinking juice, eating assorted vegetables and were quietly talking.
Suddenly we heard a loud sound. We looked at each other and remembered...
It happened a few years ago. We with my good friends were traveling wild forest places near our city. It was cold, dark and was raining that night. We were wandering a long time and finally, we saw a big fenced territory. There was a strange unknown sign at the fence. Probably it was warning about dangerous or something else. Full darkness was there inside and we were seeing the only crooked path which was disappearing into the mist.
Suddenly we saw several lights far away which were getting closer and closer. After few seconds we heard a very strange sound or voice and at that moment dark lean silhouettes in the suits rushed past us...

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