In my conclusion , the authors should be more careful about the gender equality especially in texts, images, amount of talking and the contents of dialogues because those gender gap might be affected to students of way of thinking about Japanese society Does this sound natural?
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A little unnatural
Good effort! A few errors here and there:
In conclusion, authors should be more careful about gender equality, especially in texts, images, amount of talking and the contents of dialogues because the gender gap might affect students' way of thinking about Japanese society.
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A little unnatural
Good effort! A few errors here and there:
In conclusion, authors should be more careful about gender equality, especially in texts, images, amount of talking and the contents of dialogues because the gender gap might affect students' way of thinking about Japanese society.
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A little unnatural
Change “careful” for “cautious”
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maybe “way of thinking “ in the context is a little unnatural , but “students’ perceptions” sounds better
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