11 Dec 2017

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Can someone show me the mistakes in this text please?
What makes a person successful is a highly controversial issue. Many people share the view that luck is the cause of success, whereas the detractors argue that the main reason is by far daily and continuous effort.
First of all, there are few people who were born with special flairs and talents can become artists such as musicians, actors, among others. There are also people who were born rich and we can certainly say that they have an advantage. Yet, life is not easier and they have to work hard to meet the high standards that require these professions and remain in the business.
Nevertheless, as a rough rule of thumb, if we want something we will have to work for it. Most people study hard in order to get a good job, that lets them more household income and at the same time a better lifestyle. In conclusion, I would say that there is no doubt that to achieve our dreams, not only we do need to sacrifice our time with family and friends but we also have to dedicate part of our leisure time.

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