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25 Dec 2017
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I wrote in my diary.
Is my expression natural?
If it is not natural, please tell me a natural expression!
Monday,25th December 2017
I received a Christmas present from my friend who lives in Yamaguchi Prefecture.
There was a letter that wrote about her recent situation.
I was very happy to know how she is challenging a variety of things.
I wrote in my diary.
Is my expression natural?
If it is not natural, please tell me a natural expression!
Monday,25th December 2017
I received a Christmas present from my friend who lives in Yamaguchi Prefecture.
There was a letter that wrote about her recent situation.
I was very happy to know how she is challenging a variety of things.
Is my expression natural?
If it is not natural, please tell me a natural expression!
Monday,25th December 2017
I received a Christmas present from my friend who lives in Yamaguchi Prefecture.
There was a letter that wrote about her recent situation.
I was very happy to know how she is challenging a variety of things.
補足があればここに書きましょう。ここに質問文を別の言語で書いても構いません。
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25 Dec 2017
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- English (UK)
1st sentence perfect. Then, "She wrote a letter about her recent situation." The letter did not write, she did, so that is more correct.
I would need to know exactly what she wrote to be able to say whether the last sentence is correct or not, but maybe "I was happy to know she was handling life's challenges well."
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- English (UK)
1st sentence perfect. Then, "She wrote a letter about her recent situation." The letter did not write, she did, so that is more correct.
I would need to know exactly what she wrote to be able to say whether the last sentence is correct or not, but maybe "I was happy to know she was handling life's challenges well."
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