5 Jan 2018

French (France) Near fluent
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Day 6: AUCKLAND- FLOCK HILL: Waking at 8a.m. to discover the Flock Hill, you will take a train for 2hours, and arrival at the park at 11 a.m. you visit alone and at 13h you picnic, and the afternoon is quit, tranquil, peaceful… After you take the bus for 30 minutes to go to the Hotel Christchurch and at the restaurant you will taste another specialty of the country THE MEAT PIE.

Day 7: CHRISTCHURCH- DUNEDIN: This day, you go to Dunedin, you have 3h of bus but at the middle of the journey, you stop to visit Elephant Rock, it’s an elephant in rock in the sea, he has really the shape of an elephant, at this place, you listen the sound of the sea, it’s a moment very peaceable. Then you take back the bus to go to Dunedin in the hotel Larnach Castle Lodge for 3nights.
does this sound natural?

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