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The theme is aspects of the internet.
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First of all, I strongly believe that the internet has two faces which include both merits and demerits.
Certainly, we could always contact everyone using devices in the all over the world and we can get much information through one regardless of a place, which is beneficial and brings a breakthrough in our daily lives than before.

On the other hand, We must take care of our information leaks and a hacking from the outside.

When we post our private information on "SNS" such as "Facebook" "Instagram" and the others,
We must deeply consider whether the shared information includes any problems or not in advance so as to avert troubles.

Therefore, we need to recognize both aspects of benefits and included risks on the internet.

Hi everyone!!!
I plan to apply to the Cambridge English exam FCE in this year.
then, I have a request for improving my witting skills.
Can you check my small essay following?

Someones please help me!!
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The theme is aspects of the internet.
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First of all, I strongly believe that the internet has two faces which include both merits and demerits.
Certainly, we could always contact everyone using devices in the all over the world and we can get much information through one regardless of a place, which is beneficial and brings a breakthrough in our daily lives than before. 

On the other hand, We must take care of our information leaks and a hacking from the outside.

When we post our private information on "SNS" such as "Facebook" "Instagram" and the others,
We must deeply consider whether the shared information includes any problems or not in advance so as to avert troubles.

Therefore, we need to recognize both aspects of benefits and included risks on the internet.
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