13 Feb 2018

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I would like you to correct this to more natural English please.
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I recommend you a burger named CHICKEN TARTAR of MacDonald's when you are traveling in Japan.

CHICKEN TARTAR is one of the original burgers of Japanese MacDonald's, and it is available for a limited period only from February 2018.

To be honest, I think most of the burgers of MacDonald's are not so tasty for me but only CHICKEN TARTAR and CHICKEN TATSUTA are delicious.

These are made with juicy deep-fried chicken, cabbage and higher quality bun than the other burger's.

CHICKEN TARTAR is added tartar source in CHICKEN TATSUTA. However, these are the same price for 380 yen including 8% tax. I can't understand why the same price though.

CHICKEN TATSUTA is also delicious but I prefer CHICKEN TARTAR because the tartar sauce makes it filling.
does this sound natural?

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