12 Mar 2018

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My daughter got a fever last night but today's evening her fever already came down.So we made dounuts. Her favorite japanese character "Shimajiro"who is tiger likes dounuts. So she is affected by him, she loves dounuts.
We cooked three type of dounuts, chocolate×almond, cinamon suger, lemon icing.
When she was cooking, she seemed so happy.
She became able to break an egg.
I think there are more things she is able to do when she became three years and half. I was suprised everyday.
Feshly fried dounuts was very delicious.We enjoyed tea time.

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