Could you check this paragraph for me, please? :) The beginning of a new invention, which was de...

19 Mar 2015

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Could you check this paragraph for me, please? :)
The beginning of a new invention, which was determined by motion and then called the film, needs to be traced back to the 19th century when the outstanding British photographer Eadweard Muybridge starts doing experiments with subsequent photographs to study animal movements – images of a galloping horse. One of the most influential people in developing of cinematography were Louis and Auguste Lumière. They virtually made a breakthrough by combining the functions of camera and projector into one machine hence the first film ‘La Sortie des usines Lumiere’ (Workers Leaving the Lumiere Factory) was shown in 1895. Unfortunately, they claimed that the Cinematography is idea without future; however Thomas A. Edison thought differently. He created films Ruth Dennis doing a skirt dance outsides and then in 1896 people were able to admire his first exhibition of his new version of a Kinetoscope, called the Vitascope. They were watching the Leigh sisters dancing with their umbrella in New York City. Consequently, at the beginning of 20th century cinema immensely started to develop primarily in New York. But also, in the suburbs of Los Angeles, Harvey Henderson Wilcox founded a new studio system the Hollywood. The studio which has been a huge production and has had a big impact on film productions, cinemas, fashions, and cultures.

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