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English (US)
Nice to meet you. I'm Tomoaki Oda. Please call me "odacchi". I'm 18 years old. I'm from Sanda, which is next to Kobe. I have an older sister. Many people say that I look like her,especially these eyes. I have a dog whose name is "Twink." I like her very much. I often take a walk with her.
I'm shy, so, please speak to me.Thank you for listening. Does this sound natural?
I'm shy, so, please speak to me.Thank you for listening. Does this sound natural?
- English (US)
A little unnatural
Really good! Just a couple of things.
"Many people say I look like her, especially THE eyes."
Also, "I often take her for walks."
Everything else is great.
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