Pronunciation in English is hard. Even for people that know English fluently, it's hard for us to guess the pronunciation of words. The rhythm of speaking is fairly simple, you just have to keep a neutral tone and medium speed until the ending syllable, where you will raise your tone if it's a question and lower it if its a statment.
The problem with your pronunciation is the fact that you slur over vowels when you speak. In English, every vowel is pronounced.
I would record it for you, but my family is very loud. Another speaker will probabaly provide something for you.
Recorded something too in case you wanted more reference. I think with your rhythm you're putting more emphasis on certain words that don't need the emphasis. Try to keep it smoother throughout without stopping as much. Also some words seemed to get lost in the beginning when you slurred them together. I think you're doing great so far though.
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