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8 Apr 2015
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At the moment you lie down all arms,and felt like weeping,nothing keeps you run away. Does this sound natural?
At the moment you lie down all arms,and felt like weeping,nothing keeps you run away. Does this sound natural?
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8 Apr 2015
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- English (UK)
Unnatural
Maybe something like 'While/As you lay down your arms/weapons, you really want to cry/sob out, but you can't run away/escape'
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- Simplified Chinese (China)
yes,I mean weapon
- English (UK)
Unnatural
Arms is correct :) I was just wondering how to improve the sentence for you
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- English (UK)
Unnatural
I'm not too sure on what you want to see 100% so maybe other people can help. Can send what you want to say in Chinese so I can have a look?
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- Simplified Chinese (China)
- English (UK)
Unnatural
Maybe something like 'While/As you lay down your arms/weapons, you really want to cry/sob out, but you can't run away/escape'
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- English (UK)
Unnatural
There is some flexibility with some of the words with '/' so you can choose if that is how you want to say it :)
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